On Mar 3, 2021, at 18:30, Carlo Piana <carlo@...> wrote:


On a quick review waiting for a call, I see that the quality is very high, I might say excellent. There are some quirks here and there though.

There are some which are notable and recurring throughout the text:

"works" -> "opera" (not "lavoro") in copyright parlance
"public domain" -> "pubblico dominio" (not "dominio pubblico" as would nauturally be)
"un software" NEVER EVER EVER EVER. Software is non numerable matter. "Software" (without /articolo indeterminativo/) or "Applicazione", "Programma", "Pacchetto" depending on the actual context.

Plus some improvements that would not add much, but are somewhat easy calls.

Chees

Carlo



----- Original Message -----

From: "Carlo Piana" <carlo@...>
To: "main@..." <main@...>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 10:16:57
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In Italian

AH! PPTX, you want to kill me! ;-)

K

PS: we have a markdown workflow also for slides, based on Reveal.js, but mostly
works for pandoc+beamer. The advantage of this approach is that reviews are
diffed in git! Basically we use reveal-md plus a few javascript edits that
extend comments for presentation commands, so if you print just the text, it
remains uncluttered by things like "this slide without transition".


----- Original Message -----

From: "Shane Coughlan" <scoughlan@...>
To: "main@..." <main@...>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 10:07:47
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In
Italian

Yes please!

Shane Coughlan
OpenChain General Manager
+818040358083
Book a meeting:
https://meetings.hubspot.com/scoughlan

On Mar 3, 2021, at 17:57, Carlo Piana <carlo@...> wrote:

Kudos! This is more useful than one would think.

Any cross check needed from another native speaker?

Cheers

Carlo


----- Original Message -----

From: "Shane Coughlan" <scoughlan@...>
To: "OpenChain Main" <main@...>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 09:49:59
Subject: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In Italian

The OpenChain Reference Training Slides are now available in Italian. A big
thank you to Alessandra De Luca and the rest of the team at NTT Data Italy for
making this happen!
You can download the slides under CC-0 licensing (effectively public domain).
https://www.openchainproject.org/news/2021/03/03/openchain-reference-training-for-iso-5230-now-in-italian