Re: OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In Italian


Carlo Piana
 

No problem

the text looked already almost perfect. On the other hand, I spotted bits that perhaps very few will notice, but for the sake of accuracy I will see how they can be amended without too much fuss.

Best,

Carlo

----- Original Message -----
From: "Shane Coughlan" <scoughlan@linuxfoundation.org>
To: "Alessandra De Luca," <Alessandra.DeLuca@nttdata.com>
Cc: "OpenChain Main" <main@lists.openchainproject.org>
Sent: Thursday, 4 March, 2021 14:32:37
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In Italian
Wonderful! Thank you so much for this excellent work.

And Carlo, thank you also for your super fast review!

On Mar 4, 2021, at 22:13, De Luca, Alessandra <Alessandra.DeLuca@nttdata.com>
wrote:

Hi Shane,
I'll integrate the suggested changes and send you a new ppt version as soon as
possible.

Alessandra De Luca | System Analyst | Open Source Service Line | NTT DATA
Italia
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-----Original Message-----
From: Shane Coughlan <scoughlan@linuxfoundation.org>
Sent: Thursday, March 4, 2021 1:41 PM
To: OpenChain Main <main@lists.openchainproject.org>
Cc: De Luca, Alessandra <Alessandra.DeLuca@nttdata.com>
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now In
Italian

Thanks Carlo!

Alessandra, do you want to address directly or do you want me to merge the
suggested changes?

On Mar 3, 2021, at 18:30, Carlo Piana <carlo@piana.eu> wrote:


On a quick review waiting for a call, I see that the quality is very high, I
might say excellent. There are some quirks here and there though.

There are some which are notable and recurring throughout the text:

"works" -> "opera" (not "lavoro") in copyright parlance "public
domain" -> "pubblico dominio" (not "dominio pubblico" as would
nauturally be) "un software" NEVER EVER EVER EVER. Software is non numerable
matter. "Software" (without /articolo indeterminativo/) or "Applicazione",
"Programma", "Pacchetto" depending on the actual context.

Plus some improvements that would not add much, but are somewhat easy calls.

Chees

Carlo



----- Original Message -----
From: "Carlo Piana" <carlo@piana.eu>
To: "main@lists.openchainproject.org"
<main@lists.openchainproject.org>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 10:16:57
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230
Now In Italian
AH! PPTX, you want to kill me! ;-)

K

PS: we have a markdown workflow also for slides, based on Reveal.js,
but mostly works for pandoc+beamer. The advantage of this approach is
that reviews are diffed in git! Basically we use reveal-md plus a few
javascript edits that extend comments for presentation commands, so
if you print just the text, it remains uncluttered by things like "this slide
without transition".


----- Original Message -----
From: "Shane Coughlan" <scoughlan@linuxfoundation.org>
To: "main@lists.openchainproject.org"
<main@lists.openchainproject.org>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 10:07:47
Subject: Re: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230
Now In Italian
Yes please!

Shane Coughlan
OpenChain General Manager
+818040358083
Book a meeting:
https://meetings.hubspot.com/scoughlan

On Mar 3, 2021, at 17:57, Carlo Piana <carlo@piana.eu> wrote:

´╗┐Kudos! This is more useful than one would think.

Any cross check needed from another native speaker?

Cheers

Carlo


----- Original Message -----
From: "Shane Coughlan" <scoughlan@linuxfoundation.org>
To: "OpenChain Main" <main@lists.openchainproject.org>
Sent: Wednesday, 3 March, 2021 09:49:59
Subject: [openchain] OpenChain Reference Training For ISO 5230 Now
In Italian
The OpenChain Reference Training Slides are now available in
Italian. A big thank you to Alessandra De Luca and the rest of the
team at NTT Data Italy for making this happen!
You can download the slides under CC-0 licensing (effectively public domain).
https://www.openchainproject.org/news/2021/03/03/openchain-referen
ce-training-for-iso-5230-now-in-italian









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